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I want

Posted by Noellie on

I want to feel the rain on my skin

Coolness triggering electric bumps

I want to look up into the drops

Mixing with soft hidden tears

I want to outstretch my arms

Washing the day from my skin

I want to be deafened by touch

Sensing only running chills

I want to keep my eyes open

Seeing continuous falling sky

I want to breathe deeply

Tasting liquid life from the heavens

I want to be enraptured

Wrapped tightly in the moment

I want to feel alive

Giving freedom to my soul

7 Comments

  1. lifelessons says:
    May 25, 2019 at 11:07 am

    Like how a kid feels in rain!! Well done.

    On another matter, have you seen the documentary about Mr. Rogers? It is amazingly good. Called “Won’t You be My Neighbor.” I mention this because of the quote of his above in your blog..Good quote, too.

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    1. Noellie says:
      May 25, 2019 at 2:01 pm

      I’ve seen a couple over the years on Mr. Rogers and all were wonderful, but I will double check that one in case I haven’t. thank you and yes I agree ‘How kids feel’ ..free in the rain.

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  2. Jane Lurie says:
    May 25, 2019 at 11:35 am

    Wonderful image and poetry, Noellie.

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  3. righteousbruin9 says:
    May 25, 2019 at 2:17 pm

    Stay fluid in your heart, soaking in all the warmth that rain brings.

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    1. Noellie says:
      May 25, 2019 at 6:28 pm

      💕

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  4. Mary Mangee says:
    May 25, 2019 at 9:14 pm

    I love this post. I feel refreshed after reading it. I’ve been transported into a different consciousness with your words. Excellent writing.

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    1. Noellie says:
      May 25, 2019 at 10:33 pm

      Thank you so much 😊 I do love the rain

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